D‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍ear writer, Good day, attached the instructor’s feedback re
D‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍ear writer, Good day, attached the instructor’s feedback regarding PP Proposal Oral Presentation. Instructor Email: “Email title: “PowerPoint for Proposal Orals”: Hello LK, I have reviewed your PowerPoint (attached) and my feedback is in the attached WORD document. I wasn't sure about trying to use the margin comments in the PowerPoint for my feedback, because I don't have really good skills in PowerPoint. You will need to open the WORD document and read it while looking at the PowerPoint. Thankfully, the WORD document is only two pages long, and I highlighted a few things for you to do in the PowerPoint to make them easier for you to see. In terms of content, you did an excellent job on your PowerPoint. However, I made a number of corrections in grammar. In the future, I think it would be a good idea to put the content of your PowerPoint through Grammarly. I don't think you can submit PowerPoint to Grammarly, but y‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍ou could draft the content for each slide in a WORD document and put that through Grammarly. Then, after you correct the WORD document for the problems noted by Grammarly, then you can copy and paste your content from the WORD document into the PowerPoint. Also, I noticed the formal title for this meeting, Proposal Oral Presentation. So, rather than the title, Proposal Orals, on your PowerPoint title slide, the title should be, Proposal Oral Presentation. Note that the Oral meeting is not a "Defense!". Let me know if you have any questions.” Attached 3 documents, the third document is the PP speech. We need to update it based on the last update of the proposal, ., snow bowling, and the new additional interview questionnaires: 1) Dr. Laurie feedback Review of Powerpoint & to do list 12621; 2) Dr. Laurie Final Feedback_PP Proposal Orals ; 3) PP Speech (transcript) of Proposal Oral Defense_060921‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍. Thank you

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